(SFF Bingo): Jade City, by Fonda Lee

Oct. 27th, 2025 07:17 pm
primeideal: Egwene al'Vere from "Wheel of Time" TV (egwene al'vere)
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This is the first installment in the "Green Bone" trilogy that ranks highly in /r/fantasy polls, and I found it lived up to the hype!

Premise: Jamloon is the capital city of Kekon, an island country that's the source of bioenergetic jade. Most ethnically Kekonese people--but few others--get magical powers from touching jade, and so they can train as martial artists to hone their skills. A couple generations ago, the One Mountain society of Green Bone warriors (and their civilian supporters) fought a guerilla war for Kekon's independence, as part of a wider global conflict. But after the war, the society splintered into feuding clans (sort of like the Chinese "triad" organized crime system), which are now on the verge of outright gang war. And it's happening against the backdrop of a late-20th century tech level. People strangle each other with telephone cords, record incrimidating conversations on cassette tapes, and there's a whole scene of "how do I get in touch with this guy, do I use his home phone number or his work phone or call his girlfriend or what?!" from the just-pre-cell phone era. I normally roll my eyes when authors namedrop a bunch of RL car makes or brand name guns, but if it's fictional car or gun manufacturers that coexist with fantastical superpowers, it turns out I'm here for it.

There are a lot of POVs, but not in an overwhelming way. The main focus is on the Kaul siblings, prominent in the No Peak clan: Lan, Hilo, and Shae, and their honorary "cousin" Anden. At times, mostly early on, it felt like head-hopping--are we in character A's POV, or did we just switch to B's? But maybe it's just A having a reasonably educated guess what B is thinking, either from normal human intuition or, in some cases, magically augmented Perception.

If you like magic systems, with clearly-outlined "disciplines" and delineations of what jade can accomplish, this book is for you. Anden is in his final year at the academy, which features such exciting tests and rituals as "the Massacre of the Rats," as well as non-magical education such as "competitive matches in poetry recital, speed math, and logic game." Would attend. And if you like the Wheel of Time-style magic where different people have different tolerances for magic, it can be dangerous and addictive, but there's a lot of social status riding on who outranks whom, this book is definitely for you. The descriptions of jade addiction, and the obsessive desire it provokes both in experienced users and small-time criminals with delusions of grandeur, are very compelling. A new drug has promise for increasing people's tolerance, or making foreigners able to use it when they wouldn't otherwise, but comes with its own side effects. Will international trade help Kekon modernize, or will they export their "backward" martial culture to the rest of the world? The tension that comes from being on the precipice of great technological change is palpable everywhere.

I loved the description of the war of independence, and how in some ways it was easier than maintaining unity in peacetime.

 
During the war, the people called Ayt the Spear of Kekon. He was the daring, vengeful, ferocious Green Bone warrior that the Shotarians feared and hated, a man who spoke little but wreaked deadly havoc on the occupiers, only to always escape into the shadows and up into the mountains.
His closest comrade, Kaul Sen, was the elder, more seasoned rebel, a shrewd and masterful tactician who, along with his son, Du, distributed secret pamphlets and broadcast subversive radio messages that inspired and organized the network of Lantern Men that became the key to the One Mountain Society’s success.
The Spear and the Torch.
Kaul Sen's right-hand man, Yun Dorupon, turns out to be a total creep. This part was powerful but not overstated.
Years away had not dimmed Shae’s loathing of Yun Dorupon. He’d cost her not just a friend, but the once matchless admiration she’d had for her grandfather.


Some small nitpicks:

When the story begins, Shae has just returned to Kekon after parting on bad terms with her family two years ago. At first, it's like, "she was dating a foreigner, Kekonese people can be xenophobic, that's too bad." It's not until the 46% mark that we learn more about what she was doing that was so disgraceful before she left. I would have liked to learn that a little earlier, it feels pretty important in evaluating her character. That might say more about my priorities IRL, though.

When describing Kekonese festival or cultural traditions, the narrative voice occasionally jumps into generic present tense, which felt jarring. There are a couple "interludes" that recount Kekonese religious lore about the first humans; those were fine because they were their own chapters.

There's a sex scene early on that was a bit too NSFW for my tastes, I would not want to read 500 pages of that. The rest of the book is not like that, however. Even when there were other descriptions of intimacy, it was less gratuitous.

The ending:
spoilers )
But overall, there are lots of great perspectives, like a small-time criminal getting a fancy gun:
 
He’d never owned anything bigger than a pocket-sized pistol and couldn’t believe his luck. He felt as if he were holding a baby; he didn’t know where to put his hands, how to properly cradle such a valuable object.
Or this kind of culture shock:
Sporting events on Kekon were different from how they were in Espenia. Shae had been astounded by how rowdy and jovial the crowds were over there. The Espenians sang and chanted constantly; they cheered and booed, waved flags, and shouted nonsensical instructions at the players and coaches. The Kekonese were no less passionate in their team loyalties, but no one would think to yell at the field or distract the participants.
The other countries aren't fleshed out in detail, so it's not distracting in the way that "oh this is just clearly the USA/Russia/China with the serial numbers filed off" would be. On the other hand, Espenia has a secretary of the War Department so...that aged well.

Bingo: Author of Color, was a previous readalong.

Dear Yuletide Writer (2025)

Oct. 14th, 2025 09:50 pm
primeideal: Lan and Moiraine from "Wheel of Time" TV (lan mandragoran)
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Dear Yuletide Writer,
 
Optional details are optional! Please feel free to write anything about these fandoms/characters, this is just to provide some suggestions if you're interested. I have treats enabled on my Ao3 account.
 
I'm also primeideal on Ao3 (and Tumblr), and Ember Nickel on FFN. I have many previous dear author letters from which much of this is copied, pasted, and endlessly rewritten. I've written/blogged more heavily about several of these fandoms than others at times, but I would be equally delighted with fic for any one of them.
 
For the fandoms where it's relevant, I'm checking the box for "one or more chosen tags," ie, if you want to focus on one character/worldbuilding tag and not include the others, that is very welcome! (If I requested only one character, then I specifically want that character.)
 
General Likes:
-canon-divergence AUs
-five things
-worldbuilding
-dialogue
-wit and wordplay
-nonstandard formats (documentation, epistolary, etc.)
-interactive fiction--I prefer formats like Twine to open-ended parsers.
-happy endings
-sad endings (character death, melodrama, heartbreak!)
 
General DNWs (see canon-specific notes for details):
-explicit on-screen sex (fade-to-black or innuendo is fine)
-underage characters having sex
-rape/noncon
-moralizing/didactic stories (characters Learning An Important Lesson about the value of tolerance, etc.)
-character bashing

Anathem

Erasmas, Jad, Orolo, Worldbuilding
 
Erasmas: What does his life look like in the post-canon era? Is he a mentor to future fids? What changes with the Second Reconstitution? More of his friendships with Sammann or Jules, or his family relationship with Cord?
 
Jad: What did a "normal" day in the life of a Millenarian look like, pre-canon? Is he bouncing around nearby "alternate universes," or moving farther up the Wick? Jad mentions that if it hadn't been for the Daban Urnud's arrival, Orolo would likely have become a Centenarian and then a Millenarian himself someday--what would their relationship have been like?
 
Orolo: How did he react when the Ita picked him to secretly spy on the Daban Urnud? What was actually going through his head in the early chapters that he couldn't tell Raz? Or during his death scene?
 
Worldbuilding: I'm primarily interested in the world of the concents pre-canon. Weird bell patterns! Giant clock towers! Math and science! Bizarre dictionary definitions! Whatever it is the Ita are up to! But if there's something you have ideas for in terms of the Daban Urnud or polycosmic travel, go for it.
 
For this request: DNW discussion of allswell or other mind-altering drugs.

Debrief

George Russell, Robert Alderidge, Worldbuilding
 
So on the one hand, RPGs can be kind of difficult to prompt for, in that everyone's playthroughs are different and will result in slightly different characterizations; on the other hand, I have so many feelings about these guys and would absolutely love any version. A retelling of your playthrough, what happened next, more backstory, fix-it, "fix-it" that makes it worse...
 
-I love the dramatic irony of seeing the same incidents from different POVs in the character sheets, and then trying to talk about it just makes it worse. (The Catholic Underground in Spain, Courtenay's investigation.) Anything expanding on those or another memory that they technically share but actually remember differently.
-From Alderidge's sheet: "Bykov has the distinction of being the only human on Earth, apart from George Russell, who has ever known you in any meaningful sense." What's going on with these two? How much does Bykov know about the OUC? Is there hatesex?
-Does any of this ever get declassified? How much do Dora or Jean, or the kids, ever figure out, correctly or incorrectly?
-Worldbuilding! What kind of research is the OUC (or the Soviets) doing into ghost technology? What are spirit mediums doing in other parts of the world? At rates of ~one in ten thousand, it's unlikely you'd ever run across another unless there was some effort--but there are also more people who acknowledge ghosts and auras even if they can't directly witness them.
 
For me, the disruptor was an important focal point of the playthrough--my version of Russell is increasingly horrified at the thought of using it on Alderidge, meanwhile, Alderidge is insisting that it's this great tool of mercy and it's not clear whether he's talking about himself. Then once my Russell admits to himself that getting Alderidge to cross over and get closure is more important to him than anything else, he gets his act together in kind of a ruthless Pascal's Wager-y way. The sense they both have of "okay well here's when I draw the line, it's different when it's you at risk" is part of what I love about this dynamic, so anything touching on that (or the disruptor in general) would be great, but obviously everyone's characterization will be different!
 
Feel free to lean into the shippy aspects, or not, as you prefer; I don't really want anything too anachronistic or setting-changey, but Alderidge's level of candor (or Russell's level of having-a-clue) can be anywhere on the scale, it's all good.
 
Note: some of the DNWs I've listed for other exchanges do not apply to this request. For instance, I think the use of second-person POV works very well in the character sheets, so I enthusiastically opt in to second-person POV fic here! (As well as first or third.) Also, go as dark as you want in terms of "possible outcomes include ghosts being destroyed forever with the disruptor, or haunting the world until they decay and lose all coherence."

False Doctrine series
 
Evvie, Sara
 
So maybe this was an osmosis failure, but I'm not sure I completely understood Evvie's plotline. At first, her conviction that she's called to the monastic life could have been a case of "I know what I'm called to do in life, other people [and their heteronormative stereotypes] might not understand, but that's okay." But then she meets "Fee," who "fills the void in her life," and Charlie and Hal, who maybe open her mind to different vocations and ways of serving God in the world. And there's Sara's whole thing about "I can't marry George, I think I'm the handsome rake," and the demon pointing out that Evvie finds people like Daphne attractive. It sort of seemed to be setting up an Evvie/Sara endgame? Then in the the last chapter, there's the quick swerve from "not exactly a yes" (about going back to Patmos) to "actually, talking to Charlie made me decide I want to be a nun after all..."?
 
So with that:
-I would be interested in an Evvie/Sara AU where Evvie realizes that maybe her vision isn't really telling her what to do anymore, and considers other alternatives for what to do next.
-Alternatively, something canon-compliant, where Evvie talks more with Sara and/or Kit on the voyage back to Patmos. Kit and Evvie comparing notes about their relationships with their half-siblings? Or Sara and Evvie staying friends and pen pals, post-canon? (I'll admit I don't know a great deal about Greek Orthodoxy, I'm assuming nuns aren't so cloistered that they can't have friends and pen pals in the outside world?)
-More about Sara's relationships with any of the "From All False Doctrine" characters. Does her love for fabricating completely unnecessary details come from Uncle Peachy? What does Elsa make of the events of "Neither Have I Wings," once she's all caught up? Was there more going on with "Hal's" appearance to young Sara than we knew? Does Uncle Sven have advice on living with a disability?
 
Master & Margarita

Behemoth

I'm just delighted by Behemoth and everything he chooses to be. He gets on the streetcar and pays his fare! He plays chess with a living board and cheats at it! He debates informal versus formal pronoun usage! Anything along these lines would be wonderful.

Completely optional, but for this fandom, I think there's potential for humor in a setting-change AU and/or crossover. Put Behemoth (and/or Woland and some of the other demons) in another setting, another awkward political situation, and create more "even the literal devil is no match for human incompetence" nonsense. Anything I've previously requested or written on Ao3 is fair game. Demons versus the Cold War-era KGB ("Debrief," "Chess")? Demons versus aliens in the Cultural Revolution ("Remembrance of Earth's Past")? Demons versus...other demons in World War II ("Neither Have I Wings")? For this prompt specifically, I'm even opting into RL contemporary politics mentions, as long as there's at least a little humor.

Project Hail Mary

Steve Hatch

I love Steve and how faith and science complement each other for him. Ryland kind of lampshades "you're the most optimistic guy I've ever met," which is saying something by the standards of an Andy Weir novel. More about his optimism in dark times? He seems very confident in his belief that the Beatles are just objectively the best musicians; more of his unshakable takes? Is he still alive by the time of the Beatle (spaceships)' return, and if so, what does he make of them? How does he incorporate the discovery of Eridians into his worldview?

Remembrance of Earth's Past

Cheng Xin, Yang Dong, Ye Wenjie, Worldbuilding

Cheng Xin:
A fix-it where she doesn't miss Yun Tianming at their star? Any kind of outside POV on her and the many different hats she wears: Older men patronizing her during Project Staircase? The humans resenting her in Australia? Luo Ji and the museum? What if she'd stayed on the cylinder worlds near Jupiter where things felt "normal" and 2000s-y? Her relationship with Guan Yifan--is he really a different kind of human for having been to space, or are they more two sides of the same coin?
 
Yang Dong:
For someone who has very little time "on screen," she casts a long shadow over all of the books. More about her friendship with the programmer from "Death's End," and/or with Luo Ji? What if she'd survived--what would she have made of her mother's betrayal? How would things have gone with Ding Yi?
 
Ye Wenjie:
Secrets at Red Coast Base? Some more of the "declassified" documents? The early days of the ETO? What did she work out about Dark Forest theory before meeting Luo Ji? What if Yang Dong had talked to her about the documents she'd sneaked a look at? Or if Ye had lived long enough to discover more of Deterrence theory herself?
 
Worldbuilding:
More of the "video game" that taught people about Trisolaris--what were others' experiences like playing it? The aftermath of Gravity and Blue Space? The four-dimensional artifact Guan Yifan talks to? The legacy of the old universe in the new?
 
Slay the Spire

Defect, Merchant, Worldbuilding

I love this game, and these prompts are just a few jumping-off points--feel free to bring in any of the characters or mechanics. Trying to make a narrative out of the deckbuilding mechanics would be great.

Defect: I think they're my favorite character to play--the orbs doing damage automatically, the rainbows and the self-repair power! How did they become self-aware? What's the deal with the "claw"-type cards--they seem an odd combination with all of the computery, robotic stuff.

Merchant: Why is he such a jerk?! What's his relationship with the "Courier" like? What is he doing in Act 4? Just more of the Merchant snarking at the adventurers.

Worldbuilding: I mean, take any relic, look at the flavor text, there's a story there. The annotations from legendary explorers of the past? What's going on with the "leave a card for your future self" mechanic, or the tesseract, or the keys? What's the deal with vampires and ghosts, etc, running around and trying to recruit you? Who is Neow? Or the whale at the beginning?

Steerswoman

Worldbuilding, Bel

I was thrilled by the worldbuilding in this series--the depiction of Rowan's scientific inquiry is great, even if our perspective as readers is different from the characters'. And I especially enjoyed the complexity of Outskirter society in "Steerswoman's Road"--the tribes closer to the Inner Lands growing more militaristic and less cultured, the Face People and Efraim's weirdness around women, the naming ceremony and recitation of ancestors, the importance of poetry and lore--that makes them much more than "wilderness raiders." I'd love to see more about Bel's approach to life as a warrior and a bard, whether that be with Kammeryn's tribe or others in the outskirts, or adapting to Inner Lands culture (Rowan being impressed by the way she learns the importance of the "once upon a time..." narrative was a really neat touch!) I'm open to shippy Bel/Rowan if you're so inclined, but gen is great too.
 
Something more worldbuilding-focused elsewhere in the world would also be neat--documents at the Archives? Steerswomen and wizards' POV on the same events? What does religion look like in a world where Christian symbols and language exist but most people don't remember their homeworld? (I'd prefer no authorial bashing of any specific belief system or lack thereof, but canon-typical disagreements/skepticism on different characters' part is fine and expected!)
 
Feel free to bring in any canon characters or OCs. Steffie's POV sometimes dragged for me so I would prefer if he wasn't a central character, but mentions are fine.
 
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Again, this is all optional, feel free to use as much or as little as is helpful. I look forward to reading your story!

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